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#1 bareblar03

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Posted 25 April 2014 - 02:35 AM

Hey. I have been writing a book and I copied a good portion of what I have written to Google Docs. I lost the notebook again so I can't copy more currently.

Still, I've got it on GoogleDocs. I don't want to post it publicly but if you message me your email I will give you permission to read and comment on it.

It's called "2323: The Awakening" as the title would indicate.

It follows the story of Asher Wright, a tall, blonde German who accidentally meets and falls in love with a girl named Mira Lubova. On an impromptu 6 year anniversary trip to Boston Mira goes unconscious unexpectedly. Asher takes her to the Hospital wherein they learn that Mira has a rare form of cancer affecting her brain stem - she is given six months to live and essentially doomed to death. Nearing the end of her "term" her Oncologist contacts her with an opportunity. She accepts. Together, Asher and Mira are frozen and sent 300 years in the future to the year 2323. Mira awakens early and finds that the world is not what it used to be. Asher awakens 20 years later and sets out to find her in a world torn by the aftermath of our environmental destruction. Unbeknownst to Asher, Mira has been taken in by "The City" - a megalopolis stretching from New York City to Albany wherein a majority of the population are slaves.

If you are interested in reading what I have written so far I will be glad to send an invitation.

I'd really appreciate your thoughts.

Have a fantastic night gentlemen.


Voiceover narrated version of what I have copied over to GDocs so far:

https://soundcloud.c...3-the-awakening

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Posted 25 April 2014 - 04:01 AM

Maybe we can make a movie out of it.
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#3 bareblar03

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Posted 25 April 2014 - 04:55 AM

I wouldn't mind that. I'll have to write more of it but I could fairly easily convert it to a script workable into a movie.


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Posted 25 April 2014 - 09:28 AM

can i have it in rap form?



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Posted 25 April 2014 - 07:20 PM

I'm not sure how that'd work but I'd love to do a few tracks set in the world and involving the characters therein eventually.

Right now, I've got other pressing concerns. I want to make a track about what is going on in the world today involving Russia, USA, China etc. because we are literally on the brink and verge of World War III.

I won't sit idly by and be silent.

I'd be willing to read/narrate the book if you guys would like that rather than reading it from my GoogleDocs.


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Posted 25 April 2014 - 08:08 PM

I wouldn't bother here - nobody in OT can read.

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Posted 25 April 2014 - 08:13 PM

No worries, I realized that and recorded it. I'm uploading the clips to Soundcloud as we speak.

Here's the playlist they will be in:
https://soundcloud.c...3-the-awakening

Part 1: https://soundcloud.c...ening-segment-1
Part 2: https://soundcloud.c...ening-segment-2
Part 3: https://soundcloud.c...ening-segment-3
Part 4: https://soundcloud.c...ening-segment-4
Part 5: https://soundcloud.c...ening-segment-5

Edited by bareblar03, 26 April 2014 - 05:37 AM.


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Posted 25 April 2014 - 08:15 PM

Perhaps some form of colouring book would be more appropriate.

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Posted 25 April 2014 - 08:17 PM

Hmm. I'll get my crayon box out and we can get to work. :P


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Posted 25 April 2014 - 08:20 PM

I fucking love colouring.

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Posted 25 April 2014 - 08:23 PM

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I have been decorating my wall with drawings and stuff. I pull my friends aside on occasion and we just sit down and draw with my crayons and stuff.

I'm pretty much a perpetual kid - I love to create regardless of what it is or how it comes out.


das da beez neez yo.


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Posted 26 April 2014 - 09:35 AM

Name one of the main characters after me.
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Posted 26 April 2014 - 01:18 PM

I can make you a character in the wasteland of 2323. What do you want the full name and characteristics/attributes thereof to be? Where would you live in the pollution and war ravaged wasteland of America wherein there is very little food and no law whatsoever? Geographically you'd have to be somewhere near the NorthEast because Asher will be travelling on foot primarily. He will definitely travel and see different parts of the country while figuring out a way to rescue Mira from The City.

Nothing too extravagant but I can definitely work with a lot of ideas because ultimately It's my universe to craft.


Also keep in mind you need to factor in that The City has agents spread all across the country to take people back and enslave them. There is no such thing as safety in the freedom that living outside The City offers. You're constantly at risk from marauding bandits and thieves. The worst of 'em are best off because they don't care about honor or any of that.

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Posted 26 April 2014 - 03:34 PM

Make Rilor some kind of AIDS infested bog beast. It's fitting.

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Posted 26 April 2014 - 03:42 PM

Would be fun to promote this and make a little on a side. :rolleyes:
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Posted 26 April 2014 - 04:06 PM

View Postbareblar03, on 25 April 2014 - 08:13 PM, said:

No worries, I realized that and recorded it. I'm uploading the clips to Soundcloud as we speak.

Here's the playlist they will be in:
https://soundcloud.c...3-the-awakening

Part 1: https://soundcloud.c...ening-segment-1
Part 2: https://soundcloud.c...ening-segment-2
Part 3: https://soundcloud.c...ening-segment-3
Part 4: https://soundcloud.c...ening-segment-4
Part 5: https://soundcloud.c...ening-segment-5

uuuh oh we're making a movie :)

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Posted 27 April 2014 - 12:48 PM

View Postbareblar03, on 26 April 2014 - 01:18 PM, said:

I can make you a character in the wasteland of 2323. What do you want the full name and characteristics/attributes thereof to be? Where would you live in the pollution and war ravaged wasteland of America wherein there is very little food and no law whatsoever? Geographically you'd have to be somewhere near the NorthEast because Asher will be travelling on foot primarily. He will definitely travel and see different parts of the country while figuring out a way to rescue Mira from The City.

Nothing too extravagant but I can definitely work with a lot of ideas because ultimately It's my universe to craft.


Also keep in mind you need to factor in that The City has agents spread all across the country to take people back and enslave them. There is no such thing as safety in the freedom that living outside The City offers. You're constantly at risk from marauding bandits and thieves. The worst of 'em are best off because they don't care about honor or any of that.
My name is Rilor, I don't have a last name. Make me a bandit King or something yeee.

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Make Rilor some kind of AIDS infested bog beast. It's fitting.
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Posted 28 April 2014 - 01:19 PM

View PostNympheu, on 26 April 2014 - 03:34 PM, said:

Make Rilor some kind of AIDS infested bog beast. It's fitting.

Read this as 'AIDS infested bong beast', that's fitting

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Posted 28 April 2014 - 01:36 PM

almost forgot
I had a dream about you. Instead of chest hair, I grew a garden between my legs. You were the FDA saying you needed to inspect my crop, but I saw you for what you were— vagina.

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Posted 29 April 2014 - 12:05 AM

View PostNamechangedx, on 28 April 2014 - 01:36 PM, said:

almost forgot

I'm in your sig again <3

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